Tuesday, May 7, 2013

Wordy Wednesday ----- May 2013

I love poetry.  I am not sure what the plans are for May and June with Mrs. Rollis, but I hope you all will add some creative poetry reading and writing into your spare time.  When you read a poem it explodes with meaning inside you.  If you get it, the message will stay with you forever.  If not, it will just fizzle out and die.  No problem.....thanks for trying.
Poetry is a great way to express your emotions.  At times poetry can say the most in the least amount of words possible.  I am still unpacking but I did find some interesting journals given to me my students and my fellow teachers, as well.  As I look around at all the beauty of nature, I get inspired to write.  I may be filling those journals with poetry soon.  As I plant flowers all around my new home and get ready to put pen to paper myself, I hope you will share some of your favorite poetry here.  If you are so inclined, I would love to read some original poetry from all of you too. 





What Is A Best Friend?

© John Devaney age 16 
A Best Friend is a great thing to have.
They're someone you can always lean or depend on when you're sad.
They're always there when time in need.
They're always there pushing you to succeed.
They help you live a happier life.
They're there to help you find the right man or wife.
They push and push you with all their might.
They're there to tell you they love you every night.
They don't care what other people say.
They know their life is easier to see you each day.
They're there through thick and thin.
They're ones who have no concern about the color of your skin.
They're there to help you see.
They're there because they love you for who you are.
They're there to show you off to the world like a shinning star.
They're there to always give advice or listen.
They're there to make your smile wide and glisten.
They're there to let you know if there's anything you need they have it. No matter what the problem is open up don't hide it because in the long run, you'll not only be hurting yourself but others around you who are important and meaningful in your life. That is what I believe is a best friend.

Check www.bestteenpoems.com  for more teen poetry.


Here are some of my all time favorites.

Japanese Haiku by ISSA (Translated into English)

In this world A kitten
even among insects stamps on falling leaves,
some sing well, some don't. holds them to the ground.


ED
Emily
Dickinson

I ’M nobody! Who are you?
Are you nobody, too?
Then there ’s a pair of us—don’t tell!
They ’d banish us, you know.
How dreary to be somebody! 5
How public, like a frog
To tell your name the livelong day
To an admiring bog!

Whispers of Mortality by E. E. Cummings

old age sticks
up Keep
Off
signs)&

youth yanks them down(old
age
cries No

Tres)&(pas)
youth laughs
(sing
old age

scolds Forbid
den Stop
Must
n't Don't

&)youth goes
right on
gr
owing old


Robert Frost Robert Frost

Nature's first green is gold,
Her hardest hue to hold.
Her early leaf's a flower;
But only so an hour.
Then leaf subsides to leaf.
So Eden sank to grief,
So dawn goes down to day.
Nothing gold can stay.

Edgar Allan Poe

Edgar Allan Poe

Annabel Lee
It was many and many a year ago,
In a kingdom by the sea,
That a maiden there lived whom you may know
By the name of ANNABEL LEE;
And this maiden she lived with no other thought
Than to love and be loved by me.

I was a child and she was a child,
In this kingdom by the sea;
But we loved with a love that was more than love-
I and my Annabel Lee;
With a love that the winged seraphs of heaven
Coveted her and me.

And this was the reason that, long ago,
In this kingdom by the sea,
A wind blew out of a cloud, chilling
My beautiful Annabel Lee;
So that her highborn kinsman came
And bore her away from me,
To shut her up in a sepulchre
In this kingdom by the sea.

The angels, not half so happy in heaven,
Went envying her and me-
Yes!- that was the reason (as all men know,
In this kingdom by the sea)
That the wind came out of the cloud by night,
Chilling and killing my Annabel Lee.

But our love it was stronger by far than the love
Of those who were older than we-
Of many far wiser than we-
And neither the angels in heaven above,
Nor the demons down under the sea,
Can ever dissever my soul from the soul
Of the beautiful Annabel Lee.

For the moon never beams without bringing me dreams
Of the beautiful Annabel Lee;
And the stars never rise but I feel the bright eyes
Of the beautiful Annabel Lee;
And so, all the night-tide, I lie down by the side
Of my darling- my darling- my life and my bride,
In the sepulchre there by the sea,
In her tomb by the sounding sea.

How to Eat a Poem by Eve Merriam

Don't be polite.
Bite in.
Pick it up with your fingers and lick the juice that may run down your chin.
It is ready and ripe now, whenecver you are.
You do not need a knife or fork or spoon
or plate or napkin or tablecloth.
For there is no core
or stem
or rind
or pit
or seed
or skin
to throw away.

Enjoy!




26 comments:

  1. I'm not any good with poetry, but here goes nothing.

    This is a Haiku
    Five syllables, then Seven
    Now Five once again

    Since I couldn't think of anything to write Haiku about, I wrote a Haiku about Haikus! By the way, Mrs. Prisbell, there is a typo in the last sentence of the first paragraph of this post. It says "No proble.... thanks for trying." I think proble is supposed to be problem. I don't know if you can change that, but I though that I'd point that out.

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    1. Thank you, Shane. I love your sense of humor. By the way, a Haiku usually is an observation of nature ending with a comment about what was observed. Feel free to try again. Haha
      Thanks for the type-o info. I fixed it.
      Mrs. P

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  2. well, here is my poem, i wrote it a while ago, so it`s not so great.

    This is my army.
    Great.
    Victorious
    Proud.
    Strong.
    Experienced.
    Deadly.
    Wounded and killed.
    Fighting for what is right.
    Grown throughout the ages.
    Living and dying.
    Conquering the world.
    Making it mine.
    Fighting for a living, earning less than any and all.
    As they fight for our rights and freedoms, all for nearly nothing.
    Living in tents on the frozen ground.
    Every solider fighting for his life.
    Fighting alongside artillery, as others shoot at them.
    Missing home, family friends.
    Missing the peace of life.
    This is my army


    P.S. the grammar is bad, i know, it`s ment to be like that.

    Michael Maffucci

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    1. Michael, I am so impressed by your poem. It really spoke to me. I love your free verse format too. It seems like one soldier's stream of consciousness. You captured the mood of war. Excellent job. Thanks for sharing.
      Mrs P

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    2. thanks,how are you doing in Texas? i`m sorta bored, did you read any good books recently, mabey sci-fy?
      Michael Maffucci

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    3. Michael,
      Texas is very different than New Jersey. I am trying to adapt. All the red tape to switch states keeps me busy so no time to read yet.
      You are a teenager. You should not be bored. Contact friends, get involved, go outside, and, of course, read or write something fabulous. Enjoy life. :)
      Mrs P

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    4. Is anyone reading DIVERGENT, the Veronica Roth series? She was on the TODAY show this morning. Definitely science fiction....
      Mrs P

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    5. i`ve never read that, but i`m reading a book by Ben Bova called "Farside". it`s pretty good, about a telescope project on the dark side of the moon. i would reccommed it as a good sci-fy

      Michael Maffucci

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    6. Sounds interesting, Muchael. I bet my aerospace engineer son would enjoy that one since he has aspirations of going to either Mars or the moon.
      Ha
      Mrs P

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  3. I'm reading Divergent. It's good. Just really messed up like all dystopian novels

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    1. Hi Raquel, I had a feeling some of you would be reading Veronica Roth's series. She was on rhe Today Show and they mentioned that there is a movie in the works already. Would it make a good movie, in your opinion?

      Mrs P

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    2. I didn't finish reading it yet, but I don't think it would be a bad movie as long as they keep all of the important details. I hate when there is a movie adaptation of a book and they leave out important stuff!

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  4. Alone.
    I am all alone.
    No one by my side.
    No one to comfort me.
    I lay here and stare at the ceiling,
    Waiting.
    Waiting for the storm to pass.
    Waiting to feel happy once again.
    I fake a smile.
    And the gloom begins to fade.
    Eventually,
    My smile turns genuine,
    And everything is as it was.



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    1. Raquel
      This is a wonderful poem to express emotion. I am so glad it ends on a high note :)
      Keep on writing. I love how your voice comes through in your poem.
      Mrs P

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  5. here is another of my poems, i also worte this one a while ago.

    The man in green, his wear dark and deep, like his soul forever keep.
    He longs for a pleasant sleep,
    so he took root and said
    “do not weep”
    All mourned and few laughed,
    for he was a beloved man,
    even dead.
    As a tree he stood and still stands today,
    Forever resting,
    Forever testing,
    Finding that the world was changing he awoke,
    And to the people spoke
    “ I am the man in green, and you have all much to answer for” and as a man turned in surprise “yes you, bloke”
    The man in green found his life, reborn anew
    As the world was askew
    All living in hopes of dying
    Living in red, black Christ
    The worst in us comes to show it`s price
    The man in green found himself In the blood, living and dying
    The fist and sheet knock rock and tree
    All found misery; save the man in green, forever a tree
    As the blood ended in blood and the world re-set he returned to his place
    As a tree, tall and proud
    Living and teaching
    Fighting, living, dying evermore.

    well, there it is. Michael Maffucci

    P.S. anyone want to guess what time periods the "man in green" was awake in?
    Michael Maffucci

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    1. o, wow, i just realized that i sighned it twice, oosp.
      Micahel Maffucci

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    2. Michael
      What poems have you written so far this year for Mrs. Rollis? Please post.
      Mrs P

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  6. For our poem project thing, we all included a literary cut-up poem. That is where we cut out words or letters from magazines and newspapers to create a poem, and mine was pretty neat since I cut them out into speech bubbles. Shane had done a patriotic one that sound like a commercial, we all laughed.

    we did another poem, called the "I Am" poem, and wrote two literary analyses on two published poems we found. That, however, was not as entertaining though. But now the poem section is over and Quarterlies are nearing, as well as summer vacation.

    I hope that High School will be full of excitement and the block schedule will relieve some homework stress. Two days to complete homework.

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  7. Thanks for posting, Connor. Always great to hear from you. I am glad you and the class enjoyed the FOUND poetry that you cut from magazines. They are always fun.
    Feel free to post a poem here especially I AM poetry. I would love to read some original poetry.
    Enjoy June. This is the last week of school for the summer in Texas. It's just too hot.
    I may see you soon. I am hoping to come back for graduation.
    Look for a final post from me this Thursday. Pass the word. Good luck with quarterlies too.
    Mrs. Prisbell

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  8. ok, now i know that this is very dark and/or depressing, but i think that you will enjoy it, espically you Mrs.Prisbell.

    IT SCREAMS
    Screaming with the lungs of a thousand bodies
    It calls and shrieks
    Hungering for escape, freedom, liberation from its prison
    It calls to the world with which it screams

    yes, i know that is depressing, but still...

    Michael Maffucci

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    1. You are right, Michael, I do love your poem. The IT in the poem could be so many different people or even an animal. We're you thinking of the Holocaust? I can see it perfectly.
      Great job.
      Thanks for sharing
      Mrs P

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    2. honestly i was thinking of Earth at the time, with the pollution and everything, but i can see where you could get the holocaust out of this poem.
      Michael Maffucci

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    3. Michael, your idea of Earth is quite profound. Bravo.
      I especially love the reference to " lungs of a thousand bodies. "
      Perfect
      Mrs P

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  9. New blog soon? Yes no maybe so? I'm not good at poetryish type things.

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    1. Hi Shane. Yes, new post tomorrow. Talk to you then :)
      Mrs P

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